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Oh, what a good friend,
You are to me,
You take my love,
And then you flee.

When we first met,
I doubted you,
But I gave you a chance,
And that you blew.

Oh, what a delight,
To have you here,
I’m talking to you,
But you don’t care.

You got me in shit,
And walked away,
But as soon as I was up,
You pushed me back in a fray.

Oh, how good it is,
To see you there,
Tricking her now,
And pulling her hair.

Now I have no choice,
What can I say?
Whatever angle I look,
You’re here to stay.

Oh, how that I hope,
That I have misread,
Those lies in your eyes,
That fill me with dread.

This last little verse,
I shall plea to you,
Don’t mess her about,
I don’t know what I might do!
©2009-2010 ~HattiRoseRainbow
:iconhattiroserainbow:

Author's Comments

I did it to be read in a sort of quick pace, almost in the tune of the teddy bears picnic if you know it.
Don't know where it came from, its supposed to be sarcastic, just a random little poemy song.

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:iconobsidian-nightfall:
It's got a very telling you off tone, i like this, works incredibly well...

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde
:iconmidnight-mysteries:
heh, random.
written well though.

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"Search the shadows. All you'll find is a deeper darkness than before and within it a deeper yearning within yourself...
...my dear - have you ever heard the phrase 'curiosity killed the cat?' "

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